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How long is a piece of string?
What horrors lie beneath the skin?


We question all to comprehend
And measure life from end to end,
We wrap our hurts with warmth and light,
We ‘seize the day’ to flee the night.

We quicken breath to fend off time,
I take what’s yours, you take what’s mine,
We never pause to rest our feet,
We count the seconds, every beat.

For every puzzle that we solved,
For every crime that was absolved,
Another ten come to the fore,
We take from life, it offers more.

Yet it is not an endless source
To abuse without recourse;
We’ll turn to dust and fade away,
The rope of life will one day fray.

How long is a piece of string?
For how long will this be my skin?
©2008-2009 ~ElairaHunter
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Written for and inspired by *RawEm0tion's theme 'Life Cut Short'.

Comments would be much appreciated :D

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o.O

That was AMAZING...

and I'm sorry, but I have no critique...because it was amazing...everything just flowed and fit together like a glove.

Beautiful...and very sad. Good job!

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~despite all my rage I'm still just a rat in a cage~

"Well, what have you got to lose? You know? You come from nothing, you've gone back to nothing! What have you lost? Nothing!"
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:hug: thank you very much, your comment made me feel :airborne:

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Love it. <3

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R.I.P. Herbie - 4:15 PM, 11/04/05

And while everything seems to be going under
I just want it to all be the same
:iconelairahunter:
Thank you very much :hug:

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Nobility lies in the mind, not in the blood. ~Keigo Atobe, The Prince of Tennis

Immerse yourself in *RawEm0tion.
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Very nice.

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The imagery is superb, with a really nice flow to it.
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:) thank you!

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Nobility lies in the mind, not in the blood. ~Keigo Atobe, The Prince of Tennis

Immerse yourself in *RawEm0tion.
:iconelairahunter:
Glad you liked it :)

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Nobility lies in the mind, not in the blood. ~Keigo Atobe, The Prince of Tennis

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